The 9pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQ4mc_S6ujk
6m03s Nice improv line
Overall: Solid set with consistent laughs throughout.
Performance Critique: July 2
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCvfySq3HTg
1m41s Say “she’s cute” first
6m36s Smile bigger even if it doesn’t hit
10m46s One too many Blade bits in a row
11m18s Brought them back at least
12m31s Do the hand motion as well
Overall: Really good set. The iphone throw joke was the weakest part.
Performance Critique: July 1
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zJCw-Mq-hWw
1m21s Sell the looking down and swallowing harder
2m16s Nice acknowledgement
4m10s Pause for another half second after “black”
8m49s Say “she’s cute” before “you did a good job”
9m31s Dart my eyes around while waiting for the laughs
Overall: Solid set.
Performance Critique: June 29
A bar show for six or eight people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YVQ8e9PAdRQ
0m35s Not sure why I started with this bit
1m35s And I should never start with this bit again, or if I do, come out as the character
1m48s At least I realized it right after
3m38s No need to be condescending, it’s not their fault I started with a bit I shouldn’t start with
5m31s There’s a reason I haven’t done that joke in a year
8m47s At least my save line works
Overall: Horrible set. Don’t open with Blade.
Performance Critique: June 28b
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KfjoNuJRokQ
0m11s Riffing off the last comic’s material
3m27s Good improvised call back to a riff
Overall: Great three minute rant in the middle.
