The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgCvRv_q-ts
0m39s Sound happier about this
0m54s Make mouth talk motions with my hands
1m35s Cut “in front of everything else”
2m02s Cut “On your way out”
3m38s Think about a different delivery for this joke, maybe happier
4m11s Don’t pause here, pause after “watching them take their birth control”
Overall: Weak response even for a mic, working on mostly newer stuff
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6UFHrPO67c
1m10s I got the shoes and hair lines backwards
3m19s Point at “neuro divorce” not earlier in the line
Overall: Good for a check spot
Doing a longer set on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xuj1lZ5FktM
1m35s Nice improvised bit
3m15s Address the groan and applause by different parts of the audience right after it happened, not twenty seconds later
4m58s No need for “too” at the end of the sentence
6m53s The psycho smile should show teeth at all times
11m10s Do a little crowd work or normal bit instead of going into a character when there’s a weird slow down
11m50s Nice to know the save line works
12m46s Hold the hand motion for a little longer
13m02s Change the delivery on “bring it”
14m34s Decent response
Overall: Good set, the first eleven minutes were stronger than the last six.
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFuve6YRIz0
1m37s He took the hat off and I was right
3m22s Cut out “it’s true”
3m45s Make a bigger pointing motion on “neuro divorce”
5m08s Should’ve left on the small applause break instead of giving it one more tag
Overall: Great for a check spot
MCing the 8pm show for light crowd
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsfr0YEJO8w
1m38s Nice adjustment
1m53s Should’ve pointed out she’s not proud of it since it took her so long to say it
3m53s Nice improvised save
4m32s Keep on the “bossy wife” angle
4m59s Try to remember better
5m07s It is funny to keep going between “I’m great at this” and “I’m horrible”
6m41s Don’t clarify
7m58s When MCing I can try to see if they’ll respond for longer before going into my bit, during normal sets I’d prefer they don’t actually respond
10m33s Cut down to “child abandonment. Her credits transferred in from life experience”
10m58s Try to end a little stronger
Overall: Decent job MCing a small show. The crowd work stuff was really going well, I should’ve done more of it, especially in between bits as the bits weren’t hitting great towards the end.
