Doing the check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nb6Vp89Cplc
4m08s At least this new-ish bit went over decently
4m20s My hand should go in one circular direction the whole time
4m34s Point at self for this line
Overall: Mediocre even for checks, but at least I tried out a new joke towards the end
Going first on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hhCxbX8HDA
0m29s Don’t step on the laugh
1m31s More emphasis on “disappointdar”
2m35s Nice improvised line
5m01s More emphasis on “your”
6m12s He did actually wink at me
7m27s Word this sentence better
8m18s Callback totally missed, probably don’t do the face before the I hate your hair
Overall: Okay for opening a show. I got consistent laughs, but they were consistently small. And I need a smoother way to go into my last bit.
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgPDPwiV0gg
Overall: Good for checks.
Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3rja3f9VX8
0m31s Weird joke to open on
0m38s Good improvised save lines
2m30s Smile a little on that line
5m43s Forgot to do the “phd in art history and a post doctorate degree in child abandonment” line first
Overall: Good for checks.
Going last at 2am at a music/comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0ph31Pgzt0
0m40s Add a “he blew out his arm” reference
5m50s Point at self during the whole line
6m48s Add emphasis on “after”
9m47s No need for “fundraisers” end the sentence at “synagogues”
Overall: Weird set, mostly weak with a couple of good laughs.
