Doing the check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9u2Z5Ue0Ejo
1m15s Address the one group talking sooner
2m26s Either don’t comment on it or make it funnier
6m43s Say “I know, right” instead of “yeah” to respond to “what?”
7m03s At least a rarely used save line worked well
Overall: Poor even for a check spot. Although the couple of front tables that were paying attention were laughing, I wasn’t able to bring most of the room in to my set.
The tail end of an 8pm show for about twenty people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YIkNyL3341c
1m43s Nice improvised line
2m55s Good job addressing the interruption and then bringing it back to my material
Overall: Great short set. I improvised off the crowd and the newest version of the “we’re not friends” call back is starting to work.
The 9:30 Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yA9Qav5ouiE
1m25s Always nice when I can start with over a minute of off the cuff/playing off the room stuff
2m20s Add this to the joke
4m08s Nice improvised line
6m17s Put 200% at the end of a sentence
7m05s The backwards dating needs tightening/rework
Overall: Good set, the anti-marriage bit is getting tighter, the stuff right after it still needs lots of work.
Going last 2.5+ hours into the show, with most of the crowd gone
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jAQA5tS97Fc
0m24s Be more positive, don’t get the judging idea in their head, especially at the start
1m39s Unnecessary comment
3m38s Cut “full”
4m21s First say “oh yeah, well” before “I hate your hair” and the stupid shoes should be first
Overall: Weak set.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9tpTWAf4ZE
0m08s Say “thanks” first before getting into it
2m18s Head shake not head nod
4m18s Weak laughs, do a save line by this point, or call out something in the room
4m54s Cut the green card line
7m19s Cut “full time”
8m04s Pause in between each of those call backs and start with an “oh yeah?”
8m17s The poetry reading save line doesn’t make sense, and the previous save worked okay enough to end the set
Overall: Mediocre, consistent laughs but they were mostly small.
