The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfs_FhU4V2c
0m22s Nobody seemed high, not sure why I said that
2m53s Nice improvising
5m43s Wait another half second before doing the smile
7m22s Add a “so” at the start of the sentence
Overall: Good but not great set. I did get stronger as the set went along.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBuOXGU9HUE
0m44s Add “oh yea, well” before the “your shoes are stupid”
5m49s Good way of dealing with talking
7m03s Sound happier on these lines
7m50s More emphasis on “your”
10m35s That did get weird, not sure why I went there
10m44s Nice save
Overall: Really solid twelve minute set. A couple of parts of jokes missed but I never lost the crowd and had fun.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTgaqwW0Yq0
0m53s Add an “oh yeah, well” before “your shoes are stupid”
6m00s Good line I haven’t used in a while
6m08s This joke is a little rough without the “twice the neglect” joke first
7m58s Say “kazaam” instead of “Gigli”
Overall: Decent set, the last joke didn’t hit as hard the rest though. Go back to doing it the old way.
Going up at 2am on a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fUeg1sp13rk
1m05s Get to this quicker
3m45s Do the cycles in sync in a girl voice
4m08s Put my hand through my hair as I say this
6m53s “Mistress to be named later” is a keeper
11m15s Reword “you’re twenty seven, why does your mom still list you as a dependant?”
14m21s Good improvisation
15m35s I should figure out how to always have this much fun on stage
Overall: Fun late night set. Decent response considering the low number of people there.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4gAA9ZST2tg
0m53s Cut the two lines between “look inside yourself”
2m23s Go back to using Kazaam, that seems to work better
5m04s Say “renewable contracts” first, then “if you wanna be all positive”
6m08s At least the save line works
Overall: Weak even for a mic, but at least my save lines are strong.
