The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOR0gxdonQo
0m50s Great response on a new opening joke
1m14s Do the face a little sooner
2m28s I could’ve done the regular stuff as the response was fine up to now
3m12s Nice little comment
5m01s It should be “you’re great” or if saying “I’m” do it in a voice
5m58s Don’t go up at the end of the sentence
Overall: Good set especially considering I was pissed off at the crowd at the start
Going last on the 10pm show, around 12:30
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sES6iU83Nt0
7m18s Cut the thousand DVDs credit line
9m41s Say “someone isn’t laughing” clearer to setup the next line better
Overall: Respectable set for going this late in the show with half the audience gone. I had some fun improvising with the crowd towards the start.
MCing the 8pm show for 11 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33Ha81KlbSM
1m42s Find out more about why he has all that equipment
2m22s Cut the “man, woman, human” line
2m48s Ask them what they’re studying
3m05s Say “white collar” right away instead of explaining it first
3m27s Ask more about “TV” stuff
7m48s Decent justification
11m05s Doing time between comics
12m03s Add “hope you got a prenup”
12m38s Say “don’t remember” instead of “not familiar”
Overall: It was a tiny crowd and didn’t get many laughs but I kept the energy positive. I also need to dig deeper into the crowd work and get a second and third back and forth instead of just learning surface information.
Going up 2 hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeSwM9dacYw
1m46s Weird applause point
1m49s Weirder that this didn’t get a big laugh after the applause point
5m22s Say the premise smoother
5m31s Nice to end on a good laugh from a new joke
Overall: Okay to mediocre set, nothing special. The call backs at the end didn’t hit as hard as I’d like and a bunch of the mom lines didn’t get laughs where they usually do.
A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnPhx4Z4sAA
1m03s I could comment on the “yeah” like “he’s heard that a lot”
1m53s Always nice when a week old joke hits hard
5m31s Make more of a circular motion
6m40s Nice improvised tag, make it a keeper
8m44s New line, and a keeper
6m48s I can point “you guys are laughing a little too hard at that”
9m17s Say “the same cell phone”
10m29s This ending needs to be stronger
Overall: Good for a mic, and the cell phone marriage joke went over pretty well for it being so new
