The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OmsOvXjRQn8
1m50s Decent surround sound comment
2m18s Tell the rest of the crowd to step up their game
4m00s Make the line more of a “confessional” delivery
6m14s I had to skip half the birthday joke cause I got the light
6m45s And checks got dropped
Overall: Ok set. I feel like I connected with some of the audience but not all. Chicken pot pie is a great safe word.
Going up around 2am at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lWeVD5dcbY
0m28s Good thing someone was actually from Denmark
1m56s Add “and I started getting lonely too”
2m28s Therapy is fun
2m58s That’s a good improvised line, try to reuse it
5m13s Might be decent to keep, slightly crude though
6m18s Cut this down to “the odds of this working are lower than”
7m12s There might be a better sitcom than “Growing Pains”
7m48s Add “I can take it”
Overall: Good set. The Blade bit went great at the end. The online profile has potential but needs to be tightened.
Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1qMrV3OqCw
1m28s I need a better line for when someone doesn’t have a safe word
2m02s Point out that he must really love food
3m10s Might have room to say something else about the photo as an extra laugh
4m24s Emphasize “which” harder
4m35s Don’t say “a” before “pink slip”
5m08s The look on my face when the MC cuts me off is pretty hystiercal
Overall: Good for a mic. I need to figure out stock lines for when the person doesn’t have a safe word. Also, this is the first time I ever got cut off mid joke because I was slightly over time, which was interesting.
A feedback mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=348SfzEyd30
3m05s Don’t say “five minutes” twice, just do it at the end of the conversation
4m25s Don’t pause before “cake”
4m33s Add “all the” before “enthusiasm”
6m16s Don’t stumble over the words
6m27s Voice should be a little raspier
6m48s Maybe try “I won’t yell out pink slip”
Overall: Standard weak mic response. Keep working out the newer stuff.
A bar show for 8-10 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC7rgXigvSs
2m18s Good job going with it and then “improvising” to a bit I have
2m28s Best the thesaurus joke ever did, cause it seems like I just made it up
2m49s Emphasize the “f” in birthday since they already pointed it out
5m54s Stretch out the “umm”
6m15s Go even less enthusiastic on the song
6m24s I didn’t mention any statistics, so the line doesn’t make sense
Overall: Ok set. The part when interacted with the people that were whispering and worked in a bit off of it was the best part by far.
