Tag: Critiques

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-eQuU2F7TI

1m07s Work on the woman’s voice

3m50s Make “I googled it” sound more like I’m admitting a secret

5m00s Funny interaction

5m20s But that interaction will ruin that punch line, should’ve just jumped to the next part

6m55s The safe word here might be funnier cause it’s more random

7m19s Stronger act out when I say his safe word

8m35s Good line to keep, “back to the sadness”

10m23s Cut out the waiters suicide thought unless I’ve done the wood chipper joke

12m20s Not sure why the callback completely missed

Overall: Good but some lines completely missed.

Closing out the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CzKRn2kqRHk

3m52s Stepped on a laugh a little

8m20s I need a better third dick joke

9m02s More emphasis on “special surprise”

11m39s Cut the second and third call back. End it on “your shoes are stupid.”

Overall: Solid set, the new birthday material is really coming along

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4icAO7ZLWk

3m17s Add “even with you sir”

5m14s Make “karmic wheel” into “vicious cycle”

5m45s Cut #2

6m15s Cut the word “probably”

8m54s Find a way to make that funny

Overall: Nothing special Got good practice just talking for half of the set.

MCing a 7pm bar show for 8 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IdcIH9389B4

2m33s Good job dealing with problematic sound for the first few minutes

4m34s I could pick on them not wanting to admit where they’re from

6m34s Make “I googled it” sound more like an admission of a deep dirty secret

7m00s Doing time between comics

Overall: Good job upfront. The in between time could’ve gone better.

A Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIP3JP43eY0

0m54s Take the analogy further

1m32s Hit “I don’t have any” harder

2m42s Emphasize the word “WHEN”

4m03s More happiness on the word “joy”

4m57s Work on the woman’s voice, a little less bass

Overall: Ok for a mic.