A check spot
httpv://youtu.be/W_lIOiw0j-0
2m38s Nice to see the hula hoop thing works with real people
3m33s Add “baby” at the start
4m39s Twelve pack doesn’t sound good. Make it six or twenty four or just a case of beer.
5m38s That line wasn’t necessary cause I was getting laughs throughout
Overall: Respectable for a check spot.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://youtu.be/IZW4VOWei2k
1m10s Good change to the joke
1m25s Tighten this list to get to the independent woman callback faster
3m14s The last word should be “payphone”
4m22s Need to tighten that last part
Overall: Ok for a mic. Some of the new punch lines went over decently.
A very light 8pm show during a snowstorm
httpv://youtu.be/RfgPek_aaAg
0m31s The girl voice shifted back to my regular voice
3m55s Decent improvised line
4m00s I can slow down these lines
6m48s Funny idea to do “no kitty, no kitty” or whatever the safe word is like they used to do “no whammy”
Overall: Ok considering the low turn out. The birthday bit is really getting a strong response, even in small crowds.
Going first on the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/obkruUIHvoA
1m21s No need for the “this conversation is done” line
3m12s Two weird stutters a few seconds apart
Overall: Consistent laughs but nothing amazing.
MCing the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/PLwXrE-BjK8
0m56s Have her look the guy up and down first, then say the line
1m59s Always nice to get an applause break off of crowd work
4m10s The carousel is a new line, think about the best wording for it
5m14s I can definitely dig deeper about the Brooklyn
6m28s Don’t do crazy eyes, do scared eyes
7m08s Weird pause before “bought my plane ticket”
8m07s The save line doesn’t fully make sense here as I got some laughs
Doing time between comics and the check spot
httpv://youtu.be/S93DIquG3zE
0m49s The act out should be more depressed about getting it in your eye
1m56s This has become one of my biggest laughs
3m59s I bailed on part of a joke
5m29s It should be “you just wanna” not “you wanna just”
6m08s Decent improvised line, might want to add that in
8m10s Tell her “happy birthday” before going into my bit
9m19s Good improv on this, might be the way to handle when nobody volunteers a safe word
Overall: Very good MCing set. And the check spot and time between comics went well too.
