A 9pm show
httpv://youtu.be/sEtrhcymqDc
3m41s Jump up higher on “yay yo”
4m18s Good job calling them “sarcastic dicks” for when some of them actually cheered
5m38s React to getting elbow better
Overall: Very solid and consistent set.
Performance Critique: November 3a
A 7PM show
httpv://youtu.be/KsHMsCUrT4g
1m03s Might want to cut out “it has coodies”
5m49s Work on a better “getting elbowed” motion
6m17s Change or cut the “it wasn’t a haircut” line
7m24s Cut the “blew out the candle” line when doing this shortened version
Overall: Very solid and consistent set.
Performance Critique: November 2
A music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/vIUzAJIaKRY
0m54s Skip the line if there’s no couple in the audience
2m16s Say “maybe” even softer
5m00s Say “meet” instead of “lunch or dinner”
Overall: Eh. Light consistent laughs.
Performance Critique: November 1
A show for 3 people and 10 comics
httpv://youtu.be/xPuKIMeZ3O0
0m19s Don’t put that thought in their head
1m03s I can go more self deprecating when he says it doesn’t matter
2m23s Too negative for no reason
4m28s Not sure why I got in my own head
5m26s Say “ow” the first time he gets elbowed
7m58s Decent improvised line to end
Overall: Weak set. I started out negative for no reason and didn’t get out of that mind set for the first five minutes.
Performance Critique: October 31
Going up last 2.5 hours into the show
httpv://youtu.be/c7n2f5MQmXg
0m51s Don’t pause after “life sentence”
2m55s It did get really weird
3m38s I should get sadder on getting depression in my eye
4m38s It should be “you people” not “you guys” to emphasize the discomfort
5m35s Interesting/weird transition from two jokes I don’t usually combine
Overall: Disjointed set but good response considering it was late into the show.
