Tag: Critiques

Doing a check spot on the 8pm show for ten people

httpv://youtu.be/KhgF9SZU5OY

2m31s Cut the run for president part

8m12s It should be “minimum wage” not “four in the afternoon”

Overall: Good for checks for a small audience

The writer’s mic

httpv://youtu.be/qai0xDdaIJw

2m44s Cut the Gandhi line

4m05s Basement line is good

4m38s Try to figure out a way to make this part of the bit

5m08s Tighten this line and make an actual punch line

Overall: Decent response for a mic. Keep working on that new immigrant wall street bit.

Going second on the 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/0u47f4jtdy4

0m55s Hit this whole part harder and with more confidence

1m17s Anytime I need to acknowledge them not liking the suicide joke, I should bail out of it instead of doing another 2 minutes about it

2m27s Repeat “woodchippers and power drills” under my breath before the sponsorship line

3m50s it should be “we’ll shoot you” not “we’ll kill you”

6m48s Don’t stutter on the line

Overall: Weak set but at least the end was (relatively) stronger than the beginning

Quick spot towards the end of the 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/hKwlOfAmMBs

1m13s Cut the vote for president line

2m21s Might be fun to do a power drill sound effect

2m37s Cut the Gandhi tag

3m09s Don’t pause before “but like”

Overall: Weak short set.

MCing the 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/UC-Tnq3O-z8

0m48s Guess three in a row and then go back and see about each one for accuracy

1m27s Dig more into what they do in TV

3m50s Try to give the Israeli security guy an accent

4m48s Cut the jdate part if they’re not laughing at the “smarter” jokes before that

5m24s Nice line

5m52s I can tag that with “that’s the look of, one of us needs to die already, and I don’t care which one”

7m12s Shouldn’t do the depression bit upfront when hosting

7m45s I could’ve called bullshit on that, although she had the whole name of it down

9m35s Hit “the bear” harder

Overall: Decent job MCing but could’ve been a little smoother and dug into the questions more