Going first at a bar show for 6-8 people
httpv://youtu.be/T1_JJEc9cGs
0m47s I can tighten this setup to “I ran into a high school buddy”
4m31s Make it “how do you win a…”
4m49s Hit an air buzzer like I’m answering the questions for each one
Overall: Weak set, could’ve tried doing more crowd work.
An 8pm show with 20-30 audience members
httpv://youtu.be/s1OeP0Ov6BU
0m34s Works better when I point towards my heart instead of point out
3m26s Add “in this country” after “make a difference”
3m42s Don’t stumble on words
5m06s Might want to try to slow down the responses
Overall: Mediocre to okay set.
Doing a check spot
httpv://youtu.be/RjIVMzECKpA
0m08s Say “thank you” first or at least acknowledge them in some sort of fashion before going into it
1m23s Pause before “state”
3m32s When doing the tourist clubs, I can make a “that’ll be a unique souvenir” tag
4m35s Repeat whatever he said so everyone else can hear
8m28s Say “I’m allergic to nuts” with more frustration
Overall: Pretty horrible even for a check spot.
An open mic
httpv://youtu.be/CBeHxrR0Sis
1m29s Pause between “south east branch” and “west campus”
3m53s Make it like I’m hitting a buzzer before answering
4m20s Tighten wording
Overall: Standard weak mic response
Going up though checks on an 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/Tizx2TXE7eQ
1m29s Cut that line
2m21s I can add in “notice that doesn’t ring true for the Asians with the three majors”
3m33s Might be funny to specify the job
4m23s Pause after “so”
5m17s Punch up the parents talking, but it’s a funny idea
9m01s Slow down the “just because” to articulate each word
11m06s That’s the proper way of skipping past a weird “where are you from answer” and then going into my bit
14m56s Good job dealing with it, could’ve mentioned how “PhD” isn’t a real doctor, which was his question
16m12s Say “yeah, I was as excited as you” instead
17m07s Cut the unconditional love line
17m22s Sing it more and worse
Overall: Good for a check spot
