Going up on an 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/RApTXw7weVk
2m06s Say “western” instead of “west”
2m42s Add “even I had two” or something
3m59s No need for the “ov” at the end
5m19s Change the delivery/tone on “the 60’s would be an upgrade”
7m05s Don’t cover my face on that motion
Overall: Good not great, it was a little weaker at the end compared to the start.
Going up a second time on the 10pm show because someone didn’t show up
httpv://youtu.be/hfUvgFTfQj4
0m10s Went up with a fake name, could’ve had a better fake name
0m38s Got the crowd back pretty quickly
2m08s Always nice when Blade goes over well from the start
6m01s Funnier if I said “hell yeah”
7m30s Cut the dry spot, this is the weakest part of the set, try one of the other options I’ve been working
8m00s Add “not you two, you’ll last forever”
Overall: Great set, especially considering it was slightly weird that I went up there a second time.
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/tw0id_SV_SM
0m50s Cut out “over thanksgiving”
3m33s Love that this new line is getting such a big response
4m47s Good job fixing a flub
9m13s Final evidence to cut “unconditional love” as this is pretty much the only punch line that didn’t get a laugh during this set
Overall: Great set.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/CvihjF76a2g
1m02s Nice little improvised comment
3m18s My favorite audience comment in a while
4m05s I could’ve worked the interaction a little more about asking what kind of job he plans on getting
8m03s No need to address the anti American thing as the last line got a good laugh
11m07s Cut unconditional love
Overall: Great set. I had fun interacting with the crowd and the material hit really hard
Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/iUZAJOyymBQ
0m31s Put the emphasis back on “inside”
1m50s Pause for half a second before “state”
3m02s Don’t put finger down between those two lines
5m32s Funny improvised concept with “aspire”
8m37s Say “I was just as excited”
9m35s Cut the unconditional love line
Overall: Decent for last at a mic
