The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/89fNnVr2kDY
2m04s I like the emphasis on “once”
6m34s Weirdest answer I’ve ever heard, good job rolling with it and still making the bit work
Overall: Great set. Huge laughs throughout and I improvised a couple of little things that worked.
Going first on the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/wT2p3wIE-vU
3m22s Commit to doing the kissy face for a five count every time
4m42s Good job calling back to something the MC said
5m00s I like when the crowd gets where I’m going with that, but can’t figure out how to make it happen consistently
5m22s Horny should be last, not phone at the office
8m11s Good job acknowledging it
8m46s It should be “rich and successful” and not “middle class path to success”
Overall: Consistent but small laughs, although I gained momentum towards the end.
Going up 2 hours into a show, with most of the audience gone
httpv://youtu.be/MUvHnstDiVo
4m25s Do the kissy face for longer
6m02s Signs of life
6m44s Say “fail” instead of “end”
7m20s Should’ve done the “I never realized you understood so much English” line to end
Overall: Weak response but I did a good job of fighting through, staying in the moment, keeping my energy up and not mailing it in.
An 11pm show for 8-10 people
httpv://youtu.be/9VBlSRcl2YQ
0m09s Emphasize “Russian” and then “immigrant”
2m00s Milk the face for even longer
3m36s Air quote with the mic hand too
4m04s Good improvised save
4m28s Good eye roll, try doing it even harder for longer
Overall: The jokes were up and down but I was really present in the moment and did a great job of acknowledging everything and playing off of it.
An 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/wL_SxjY7ZnE
1m07s Nice to have a laugh there, it’s unexpected
1m34s That’s a good amount of time to do the kissy face, but I can milk it for even longer
Overall: Eh. The set order was weird because I was working on one very specific thing and it didn’t really flow right. But at least I ended strong.
