The writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6M8nMN10jw
1m16s I did the whole old joke to try out this new part, whether this new part works is still inconclusive
4m07s I might not need this part, I can just say “you have to go to the gym and run on the machine” and then go straight to her last line
Overall: Working out some newer stuff, keep working
The midnight show, I’m on around 2am and there’s only five out of the original fifty audience members left
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrNCuZDyyVw
0m35s I decided the only way to do this spot was the go completely conversational to start and interact
5m42s The guy saying that made my set totally worth it
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fLpNv5VrqWs
1m50s This is why I shouldn’t do too many dark jokes in a row, people start thinking I’m serious
Overall: I made the best of a tough situation where most of the audience had already left and the remaining members were falling asleep. Having one of the audience members say, “he should’ve gone first” was nice to hear
The Saturday 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JJmjoGhKtA
2m29s I should’ve called them out on echoing me a second time
5m29s The “in the moment” comments always get the biggest laughs
Overall: Solid set
Saturday afternoon open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ff7QZA0stMw
0m21s Change “your” to “our”
2m19s Get rid of the seconds part
3m54s It should be “in the market” not “on the market”
Overall: Working out newer jokes, there wasn’t much response at this mic, but I can still see what parts can be fixed
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-_59X6226Y
3m06s Good job getting an unscripted laugh to get out of a joke half failing
7m29s Kill the restaurant to girl comparison
7m42s Good job ending on a laugh
Overall: This was a weak set. I’m getting small laughs throughout, which is better than no laughs, but there wasn’t a single big group laugh during my set.
