Performance Critique: May 26

A mixed music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDhF5hay33k

0m58s First time that’s gotten 3 “awwws” in a row, I should’ve called it out

3m38s It should be “intended purpose” not “intended feature”

5m48s One person really liked that joke

Overall: I remembered this going better than it went on the tape

Performance Critique: May 25

Doing a set at my Astoria show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PlGJ6waSRKg

2m03s Reword to “he booked me here tonight”

2m22s No need to say all the stuff I just said

7m48s Don’t say that either

Overall: I know this intellectually and don’t usually do it, but hinted to the audience that they suck and that I have a more important set to do after this. That’s  guaranteed way to turn an audience.

Performance Critique: May 22d

My fourth show of the night, in the basement of an Italian restaurant at 2am

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pd9X-47M17A

1m01s Go after him more, or try to get some sort of laugh

6m04s Get rid of eucharist

Overall: Considering I was on towards the end of a late show, this was decent enough

Performance Critique: May 22b

I had to leave to get to another show, so I went up before the MC

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMs5cipg7fg

4m43s Say “I like your shoes” in a flirtier way

Overall: Pretty mediocre set, I should’ve done more MC type stuff since I went on before the MC

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