The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/naUifa1KTSg
4m42s Delivery it happier
4m56s Good comment on it, give the girls a stat line or comment “I like how the guys are slow clapping and the girls are pissed off.”
Overall: Solid short set
Performance Critique: March 26
Going up 2.5+ hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/awDIAEDdCME
1m50s Good positivity about it
3m01s Enunciate “pussy” better
5m18s I can say “that’s my favorite too, maybe we’re soul mates”
6m10s Cut or completely rewrite the government thing
Overall: Good for a five person audience, last bit needs rewrites
Performance Critique: March 25b
Opening on a 4:30pm show
httpv://youtu.be/tW4kKZIIUPk
3m28s Purse my lips more like a real kiss
5m25s Do the sarcastic eye roll for longer
6m12s Say that the pastry arrives before the wish
Overall: Not great, not terrible.
Performance Critique: March 25a
Opening on a 2pm show
httpv://youtu.be/ETNDxaNDEiw
3m19s Could’ve picked the magnet guy for the cycle as a call back
Overall: Some good laughs but not amazing.
Performance Critique: March 24
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/T-Fq1FkcuNQ
1m18s Cut the pander and south lines
3m27s Smile harder
7m34s Not sure if it needed a save line there
9m10s It’d be good to get a more balanced left to right rotation going on the community college name
10m37s Good improvised “150 million” line
Overall: Started out strong then went to okay.
