Doing a regular set at my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-Ann0zm86E
2m05s This transition makes no sense after the previous interaction which I didn’t finish off, so it makes full sense that the joke failed
2m59s The hotel interior should be part of her voice
7m03s No need for the second “I know”
8m09s I should’ve gone into my “if only one person laughs, we’ve found the real serial killer” line after that low reaction
9m37s Mean but funny
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=odLOgov6UnM
Overall: I tried out a bunch of unpolished jokes up front and some went better than others. Not a great set, but I gotta do unfinished jokes somewhere.
