Performance Critique: August 26b

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9tpTWAf4ZE

0m08s Say “thanks” first before getting into it

2m18s Head shake not head nod

4m18s Weak laughs, do a save line by this point, or call out something in the room

4m54s Cut the green card line

7m19s Cut “full time”

8m04s Pause in between each of those call backs and start with an “oh yeah?”

8m17s The poetry reading save line doesn’t make sense, and the previous save worked okay enough to end the set

Overall: Mediocre, consistent laughs but they were mostly small.

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