Late night music mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tuQjwn4Zx8c
1m33s I could do the shaking head comment of “you’re shaking your head like, there’s no way you’ll last that long”
2m38s Do the bar chart motion more than once
2m45s Nicely improvised save line that I can reuse
2m57s Don’t single out one person for “you’re a dick” make it the whole crowd
3m36s I need stronger “neuro” examples
4m05s Great call back line, worked the first time I did it
4m48s The end of the joke should be at “neuro war profiteering”
5m27s Wording should be “I just bought them all”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJW09xET0uc
0m36s I improvised that line, and it’s a keeper
1m14s I need a different line instead of the rack
3m07s Make like I’m driving a car or something
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oI6JIWEkeCA
0m01s They brought me up a second time after the rest of the performers went up
0m30s I’m stalling til at least one person is listening
9m17s Good save to turn an “ooo” into a laugh
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=auSX4XFxa1A
4m05s I tried writing on stage, it didn’t work but it was fun
Overall: The first time I went up on stage went well enough but the second time at the end of the show (Part 3 and Part 4) it was hard to bring people’s attention back.
