Performance Critique: September 9a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7NN9ScmgyE

1m00s Use two hands for the different parts of the Venn Diagram

2m42s Cut the kegger line

2m56s This line is a keeper

3m50s Kill the whole part after war profiteering

4m29s Be more playful on this last line

6m03s Don’t step on the laughs

Overall: Great for a mic. I found the key line in the ID joke and now know where to go with the joke.

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