Performance Critique: September 8c

A music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gbhvjHuTxII

4m38s I need to figure out a way to get the math line into a different joke

5m09s Too unrealistic to get a laugh

5m18s At least I can bring them back after a new joke that isn’t working yet

6m58s Instead of “did this” say “talked about this”

8m12s Make a clearer bar chart

9m02s Make a pistol shooting motion

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5trqnewPTUc

1m39s Don’t do the second part if they don’t laugh at “perfect” I should know this by now, and this is a reason to no longer have this be my closing joke.

2m47s Instead of “she” say “Jenny”

Overall: Started strong, lost them on a new joke, brought them back, lost them again, brought them back, then lost them for the last two minutes.

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