Performance Critique: September 8b

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JdTcLptLbPI

4m19s I need a little more set up for this joke

5m16s Cut this line

5m28s At least I’m able to bring the crowd back

6m13s Try saying, “the tight ones don’t groan… sorry to give away your secret…”

7m45s Make a better remote control

9m10s I shouldn’t go for the second part if they don’t laugh at “perfect”

Overall: I lost the crowd twice but was able to bring them back twice. It’s better not to lose the crowd at all, but it’s good to know I can bring them back.

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