The 9:30 Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJs8YX3ddH8
0m40s Decent improvised line, might be time to bring this joke back for another try
2m34s Figure out an act out for it
6m51s It should be “anti pretending you can predict how you’ll feel twenty years from now”
7m20s I can add “that’s the misogynistic part”
Overall for part 1: Decent set. The anti marriage material still needs work.
Going up a second time because the show ran out of comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_EtWDmuO0o
0m48s The better joke is “hundreds, of seconds, of material”
4m39s Might be worth adding this as part of the standard joke
6m00s The “oh they do” helps the joke
6m56s Add a “I guess” before “somebody went to”
8m26s The end of that joke finally worked decently
9m51s Great delivery on “at least someone cares”
10m56s Change “get” to “got”
11m28s Setting up someone as the only fan may help the joke too
11m48s These two lines really help the joke
12m27s The only fan callback makes that stronger
Overall for part 2: Great set. The kazaam/alimony joke went really well.
