Performance Critique: September 5

Hosting an open mic (with a broken mic)

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=swG1ilj47Sk

0m12s Say “in America” earlier

0m40s Sound happier and more excited while being this morbid

0m50s Figure out a wood chipper death

1m30s Cut this bit or make it part of something else, it doesn’t have enough legs on its own

1m58s Make the motion more circular

5m36s Don’t step on the laughs

6m08s Reword to “and NEVER being able to use your friend’s phone”

7m25s Say “gray wall matches the gray drapes… on the only window…”

8m09s Weak callback, rewrite

Overall: Average mediocre mic response, tried some new stuff and reworked some less new stuff

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