Performance Critique: September 5a

The Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0719iME_6Q

0m43s Deliver the scratched line more playfully

1m25s Say it more playfully, don’t deadpan

2m43s Try changing “TiVo” to “DVR”

Overall: I tried to change the ending of an old joke and added a callback to it, and then tried out a new joke that needs work

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