Performance Critique: September 30a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WuWds23jMTs

0m37s Change the tone on the question

1m31s Good improvising

2m24s It should be “everything is open” not “my taste in restaurants”

3m35s Change to “let me pick the restaurants”

Overall: Ok for a mic. Keep working on the birthday stuff.

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