Hosting an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZrFPncDg88E
0m56s It should be “liter of wine straight out of the bottle” not bottle twice in the same sentence
2m37s Cut the everything is open line and point out why can’t I pick the place for my birthday
2m50s There should’ve been a line before this
3m11s This should’ve been earlier
3m30s Should’ve done this at the top of the joke
3m57s The order of the whole joke is messed up
4m29s Say “wouldn’t be” instead of “wouldn’t have”
5m29s Change the word order, make the wish first then blow out the candle
6m29s Doing time between comics
Overall: Response wise it was great, but I butchered the order of my new joke. The order on the birthday stuff is important so I can build up sympathy upfront and then get mean as a response, instead of just starting off mean.
