Performance Critique: September 28

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJrC4Qdh_Es

0m19s Good pause and stare

1m01s Work on a stronger “depression in the eye” act out

2m23s Good act out, figure out a way to recreate that

2m42s It should be “important enough” not “good enough”

4m17s The flexible line should be before the cancer line

5m18s Cut “linner” it only worked once

5m50s Good improvised line

6m29s Pause after “happy birthday” if it gets a laugh

6m54s Decent second dick joke

7m18s Good improvised save

8m12s Great improvised call back save

Overall: Very good set, I did 4 or 5 new minutes in the middle that went decently well.

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