Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3d0uDbecows
2m31s Order of the previous minute needs a better logical grouping
3m12s Might be worth keeping “linner”
3m23s Don’t explain why they haven’t seen each other
4m48s That’s a shorter safety word joke
5m18s Say “well” before “welcome to life”
Overall: Ok for a mic and working out new material, weak ending though
