Performance Critique: September 25b

“Headlining” the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5a-usUKU2Yk

0m40s The microphone is having issues

1m39s That’s a funny from the crowd and I played with it well

4m08s Good job going into the crowd work here

4m44s Good job improvising a response

4m53s And a great improvised call back

9m15s Weird pause in that sentence

9m41s I said “three inch” twice by mistake

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XB0Hv3hYbJE

1m36s On the bright I got this joke down to under 100 seconds, but there were only three solid laughs in that time, I need to make it funnier or shorter

2m39s I could’ve added, “let me know if you need another four and half inches”

5m09s Commit to the song more

Overall: I had a solid 18 minute set with some good improvised lines throughout.

Verified by ExactMetrics