Performance Critique: September 24

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vyOFOWBlvAE

0m57s Good line

1m54s If they say yes do a “I got depression in my eye” act out

3m00s This line has been doing well lately

4m14s Good improv, try to incorporate it into future sets

5m17s Funnier if I set it up that we have one specific fan

6m19s That’s funny to incorporate

6m57s I need a dick joke that doesn’t take 45 seconds

8m51s Good statement

9m14s Don’t stumble

9m52s Could’ve done an improvised callback to “what’s up 550?”

Overall: Great set. I really interacted with the audience. I need to expand how I want to handle the “safe word” concept, but it has legs and allows for lots of improvised callbacks.

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