Doing a 45 minute feature set for mostly musicians
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bROutMkKkcw
1m45s I didn’t need to address the crossed arms there, cause I had just gotten a good laugh
3m44s Good job addressing the situation, I could’ve gotten a couple extra laughs on “If you guys could just keeping smiling and not laughing the whole time, it would mean the world to me” or something
4m26s Instead of “What? You guys have morality” make it a statement as “I learned you have a morality”
4m42s Milk the poses for longer
6m37s Pause for longer between the first and second position
8m36s Don’t do this joke so early on, as it’s one of my weaker jokes and I need to build more momentum first
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=niuvSjKQoXw
0m52s Don’t say “here we go” twice, find different words before “sand”
1m12s Get more laughs before this
1m30s Deliver this with more confidence
2m39s Do one more round of “pow pow”
2m56s Pause for laughs
5m15s Kill the draft room line
5m47s I don’t need “to drive”
7m57s It should be “impress her friends with” instead of “brag to her friends about”
8m13s I should address the person doing the “whooos” instead of laughing
9m01s It should be “great COMEDY class”
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WaOMdkSasjE
0m25s I should’ve added, “Maybe I’ll try out those moves at the Greenwich festival”
0m42s Overly aggressive to the guy for no reason, I should get a laugh off of him instead of just getting mad
1m22s Only say “nobody believes me” until it gets a laugh, I should’ve done it once in this set
5m05s Sell the fist pump more, and address the “whooo”
5m19s Someone just walked in the room and I’m addressing it
6m26s More emphasis on “WHOLE”
6m55s Pause longer after “got your nose”
7m11s Ask more about how you meet at Yoga school
7m37s It should be “felt familiar” not “looked familiar”
8m55s Make a more natural dropping motion
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzMr_4nVeNU
0m10s Pause longer for it to actually get uncomfortable if I’m gonna acknowledge that
1m29s Good job mentioning the slogan again after it went off track a little
6m48s Don’t point to myself when saying “for her”
7m23s I should say “YOU’RE my netflix plan” instead of “it’s”
Part 5
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJfOgGePvFA
2m59s Say “inefficient” more clearly
9m10s Sell the heart attack better
Part 6
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9GlEoAUW_L0
Overall: I did 49 minutes without notes, which is good. But I was overly concerned about remembering all my jokes that I didn’t do much crowd work and the places where I interacted with the crowd I seemed annoyed. If you want to hear 97% of my jokes, this is the post to watch.
