Performance Critique: September 21b

A backroom bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQ4emj8rPfk

0m21s Playing off of what the MC said to start

1m10s Good job incorporating an improvised part of last night’s show into tonight’s material

1m44s Don’t stumble on the line

2m23s I love that line

3m40s Change the order of these two lines

5m14s I missed the “I’m Kazaam in this example” line

5m52s I gotta find a way to always make someone in the audience a Kazaam fan

6m22s Stepped on a laugh a little bit

6m30s Do the hula hoop a second time

8m10s Best response the cell phone marriage joke has gotten to date

Overall: Great set. Newer material is hitting well. Make minor adjustments per usual

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