Performance Critique: September 20b

Closing out the 9:30 show for 8 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7lik_FGtA0

0m48s Great improvised line to someone else’s bit, too bad I can’t reuse it

1m58s There was a crazy audience member, but she left before I could have fun with it

4m20s Actually trying to talk about what happened two hours ago, without writing it first

6m48s Shouldn’t talk about this on stage, even if I think it’s true, won’t help anything

7m51s Decent improvised tag

9m08s Funny train of thought about why the wood chipper is a pain to use

9m28s I wonder if I can work this in as a bit, instead of a one time thing

 12m23s After “all we have is each other” I should’ve gone with, “where’s that wood chipper?”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t1yrkHaRNYM

0m30s Nice improvised call back

1m04s That’s a funny statement out of the blue

1m48s It should be “your friends” instead of “you”

3m27s Should’ve pointed how he didn’t deny them doing it the floor, that the pivoting was the false assumption in my statement

Overall: Great set. I think I improvised 10 or 12 minutes. I need to figure out how to be this relaxed and in the moment every time I’m on stage.

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