Performance Critique: September 1b

A bar show in a hot room without air conditioning

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h0Z1AKr0jJI

1m55s Call it a Venn diagram

2m10s Make my bar chart smaller

3m22s Cut this line

4m10s And cut everything from the previous note to here

6m08s The van joke needs to be clearer, people are missing my whole confounding / combining cell phone plans and child adoption

6m44s Slightly meaner than needed

Overall: This is why you shouldn’t do a bunch of untested jokes in a row at a real show. There is a lot of fat on these newer jokes that needs trimming and rewriting.

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