Performance Critique: September 18b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90JmfnP6OLs

0m27s I need another retort before going into material

1m33s An applause break but I’m clearly annoyed

1m55s Add in “looks like a lot of people have quit their jobs”

2m15s Say “maybe” harsher

3m36s I stepped on a laugh, but people were talking so I didn’t want to lose control

4m24s Do the motions slower and milk it more

5m20s Acknowledge him saying “that is fucked up” before hitting the punch line, or don’t stop the first time and then address it later

8m00s I’m not usually condescending but I was thoroughly annoyed by the talking at this point

Overall: I had a strong set but I didn’t much fun because of all the talking and disruptions.

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