Performance Critique: September 17b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6PgcAs5QQE

3m57s I should’ve just stuck with the messed up wording instead of rephrasing

6m31s This setup feels forced and robotic, I need to make it more conversational

8m29s Hit that “open source” punch line harder

9m04s Find something funnier than “neuro athlete”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reZmpKXKlNg

Overall: Kinda mediocre, I got laughs throughout, but not a lot of huge laughs. The biggest laughs were improvised lines, and I look like I could be having more fun.

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