Performance Critique: September 15c

A show for 10-12 people at a bowling alley

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnOBcZITpDY

0m14s That was a reference to something the host said, but it was five minutes before he brought me up, so it didn’t make sense anymore

1m19s Look at the same person when starting this, so it looks like I was just continuing their student loan conversation

3m51s Hit the mom lines harder

6m14s This needs a smoother intro

8m22s I need to change “prompt service” to something else, it consistently gets minimum laughs

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L3wCR0F1lvQ

0m20s Change the “notch on my spreadsheet”

0m37s Keep looking at the same person for the second line of “all I know is…”

Overall: Mediocre to averageish, I lost them in the middle of the set for a bit and could’ve done a little more crowd work.

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