Doing a set at my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edvQpKoJAoY
1m19s Since Halo isn’t crucial to the joke, pick something else that everyone has waited online for
2m16s Make this sentence clearer
3m35s Change the spreadsheet and winning formula lines
8m42s What I just said should’ve gone after “businessman” ten seconds later
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jlt1DxBtVC4
0m25s Only do “and nobody believes me” twice, not three times
2m05s After “pause” say “Ben” before saying “I didn’t get you anything”
3m19s Change “you’re not funny” to “I don’t appreciate your jokes”
Overall: Eh, slightly below average but the crowd work up front was good.
