Performance Critique: September 11

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cihw37JcRs

3m22s The pinky and eyebrow raise is funny

6m21s The fundraiser line is a good improvised line

6m31s The start to this joke is weird

8m28s If they laugh really hard, I don’t need to do the motion

9m29s The iPhone app part of this joke needs to be rewritten or killed

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhmbrSiiwks

1m15s The DVR joke needs to be funnier

1m27s Say “it’s the Netflix plan” not just “Netflix plan”

Overall: Very solid set. The the iPhone part of the Yelp joke needs fixing as does the DVR joke, but everything else is solid.

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