Performance Critique: September 10b

A Friday 6:30 show for ten or fifteen people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aCFfl0BnTbc

2m49s Weird that the plane line completely missed when everything else is hitting

4m47s I improvised “cash only”, I should keep it

6m36s Call out the girl that wooed on it

7m11s Extra explanation of DVR didn’t lead to extra laughs

8m59s Turn to the side for “second door on your right”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4njCXzQ_ms

1m17s Learn to save my closer for the last joke instead of doing it earlier, otherwise I won’t end as strong as I can

Overall: Solid eleven minute set, the DVR relationship joke needs work and the neuro joke still needs some tweeking

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