Performance Critique: September 10a

A Friday open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzAu-R4E3aU

1m22s I need something else in there instead of “nice rack”

1m44s Say “girls I hook up with” not just “girls” it’s not clear enough

2m10s Do something instead of broccoli

3m22s Waaaay to wordy, although maybe it’s so wordy that it’s funny

Overall: Average response for an open mic. The millionaire joke needs a better line towards the end.

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