Performance Critique: October 8b

A mic with five or six comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HuEQOKwYHV0

1m35s Say “twice neglect” happier

2m43s Don’t pause after “bullshit”

3m20s Pause for half a beat after “education” and again after “love”

3m49s Say “glutes” instead of hamstrings

Overall: Working out new jokes and rewrites, there’s potential but they need work

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