Performance Critique: October 8a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YYDoxOmGVwQ

1m41s Rephrase “you don’t wanna know what I’ll do”

2m07s Put the emphasis on the word “AND”

2m30s Weird pause around “ladies” that should be the start of the next sentence, not the end of the sentence

4m40s Pause after “I’m not a sociology expert”

5m19s Don’t acknowledge it’s messed up

5m50s Change this punch line, there’s a lot of potential for this joke

6m22s Maybe I should say “open source for open relationships”

Overall: Working out new stuff at a mic. The “we’re not friends” joke has potential

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