Performance Critique: October 7b

The music and comedy mic, I’m there earlier than usual

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQcdDrNrWiY

0m46s Don’t acknowledge the riffs are bombing that quickly

2m22s Say “and” before “I can’t play tennis drunk” or it seems disconnected

2m34s Do the mom impression better

2m42s Kill the medical jargon line

3m35s Put more emphasis on the disgust on “buy my love”

5m25s More emphasis on “important”

5m37s Cut the slogans

7m38s Shouldn’t have forced that tag back into the joke after it got derailed

Overall: Working out newer jokes is rarely pretty, but always necessary.

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