Performance Critique: October 7a

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWtuB9INhKM

0m52s The “Shmuck” should follow “syndrome” without a pause

2m09s Don’t stutter

2m41s Remember the jokes

3m02s Sell the disgust of buying my love more

3m47s Cut the slogans

3m55s Try “disapproving mom hero”

5m06s Try “no actual monkeys will be hurt, they’ll be killed”

Overall: Trying out newer material, it needs work.

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