Super late night (3:30am) at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pk2zfQH2IJQ
1m01s I’ve had this line for a week, gotta try it a real show now
2m01s This needs an actual punch line
2m23s Before responding, add “and I’m like”
2m55s Do the right hand motion there, don’t go wide
5m25s Deliver the haircut line in a more throw away manner
7m46s Not sure about keeping the slogan
8m24s Jump as I say “cannon ball”
8m37s Point outwards on “most people” not to myself
Overall: Good set for the middle of the night. The new birthday material is almost there but needs a little more work.