Performance Critique: October 6c

Super late night (3:30am) at a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pk2zfQH2IJQ

1m01s I’ve had this line for a week, gotta try it a real show now

2m01s This needs an actual punch line

2m23s Before responding, add “and I’m like”

2m55s Do the right hand motion there, don’t go wide

5m25s Deliver the haircut line in a more throw away manner

7m46s Not sure about keeping the slogan

8m24s Jump as I say “cannon ball”

8m37s Point outwards on “most people” not to myself

Overall: Good set for the middle of the night. The new birthday material is almost there but needs a little more work.

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