Performance Critique: October 6a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KPRTp4X8_8

1m01s Don’t even reask them, just go with whatever I heard

1m31s Be more indignation about not getting to pick the restaurant

3m17s Change the physical position between the lines

4m07s Hit “I’m allergic to nuts” harder

4m34s Say “candle” not “cake”

5m20s Rushed the end cause I was out of time

Overall: Great for an open mic, still need to get the words and delivery smoother.

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