Performance Critique: October 6c

A music/comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pq5MgGPIGTA

1m10s Do the republican line before the favorite joke line

2m53s That’s a good improvised line

3m07s After “sad puppy eyes” I should go “this is where I capitalize on her lowered self esteem”

4m02s Cut the medical jargon line

4m53s Go back to a little crowd work or acknowledge I lost them at this point

6m25s Pause after asking that question

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7OEqv3MbcAI

Overall: I wasn’t doing great to begin with then I totally lost them after three minutes and never got them back.

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